I want Higer rank in the police Fix Sir please accept it - DENIED

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Re: I want higher rank in the police

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THE POLICE ACADEMY OF SAN ANDREAS POLICE DEPARTMENT
CHIEF OF POLICE DEPARTMENT EDUARDO SANTOS


Dear applicant,
We have detected some mistakes in your application and have set its status to pending.

The mistakes are:
  • Your forum name does not match your in-game name. The forum name should be your in-game name without the underscore "_".
    Please adjust your forum account name under the required criteria.
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  • The application / topic name should match your in-game name without the underscore "_". Example > Elias Carter.
We expect the application to be fixed in 48 hours, otherwise it will be denied.
Signed,
Elias Carter
Senior Instructor


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Re: Delete

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Delete
Last edited by David on Thu May 21, 2020 4:17 pm, edited 2 times in total.

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Re: I want higher rank in the police

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You haven't changed what I asked you to.
You didn't even touch the topic title.
Also, your employment contract contains the name "Kevin Brown" and i'm pretty sure that's not you.
Make sure to read what I said and change it within 24 hours.

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Re: I Did sir ! Re

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1. PERSONAL INFORMATION [IC]
A. Name: <david>
B. Surname: <Blue>
C. Age: <25>
D. Residence: <Rodeo, Los Santos>
E. Origin: <State of San Andreas.>
F. Passport: Yes i have
G. Driving License: Yes i have
H. Weapon License: Yes i have

1.1. PERSONAL INFORMATION [OOC]
A. Age: <16>
B. Discord: <David#2284>
C. Are you able to speak and/or listen on voice?: <Yes>

2. EXPERIENCE AND BACKGROUND
A. Have you ever worked in a government agency (such as PD, FD, EMS)?
<Yes>

B. What groups have you been, or still are, apart of?
<PD FD>

C. What is the highest rank you achieved in a group, and which group?
<None>

D. Have you ever been involved in criminal activities, if yes, which?
<None>

E. Name at least three of your friends:
<Winston_McMillan,Ryan,Tom_Shebly,Artyom_Collins>

F. Have you ever been convicted in the court of law?
<No>

3. MOTIVATION
A. Why do you want to join the San Andreas Police Department? [100 WORDS MINIMUM]
<Help people in need,fight against the crime,i love to defend the law,i want to help every single volunteer that is new or does not know something.>

B. What does it mean to you to be a law enforcement officer?
<It`s a big honour to serve a country>

C. What are three negative aspects of your personality?
<I have none>

D. How would you describe yourself?
<,intalligent, and kind person who love help the others>

E. What is your goal in SAPD if you get the chance to join?
<dream of my life to be a good cop help others stop crime>

4. EMPLOYMENT CONTRACT - LINK
I, david blue, agree to the terms of the contract, to its sections and to the lawbook of San Andreas.
I agree to ensure their faithful observance, to defend the citizens and obey lawful orders issued by superiors.
I agree to protect the rights and liberties of San Andreas.

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Re: I want higher rank in the police

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Edit your original application, I will remove your replies.
You STILL didn't change the topic title and the forum name.

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David_ Blue

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Trying to fix

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Re: I want Higer rank in the police Fix Sir please accept it

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THE POLICE ACADEMY OF SAN ANDREAS POLICE DEPARTMENT
CHIEF OF POLICE DEPARTMENT EDUARDO SANTOS


Dear applicant,
Thank you for your attempt to join our department,
Unfortunately you have been denied from entering the Police Academy of San Andreas Police Department.

The application was denied for the following reasons:
  • Blatant plagiarism
  • Applicant deleted the main topic
You may not re-apply until 27/05/2020, applications posted before this given time will be denied instantly. In the meantime, try to work on the issues listed above and fix them.
Signed,
Elias Carter
Senior Instructor